successive sentences or phrases follow the same pattern of wording in order to emphasize and idea
Error: the workshop had a whiteboard on one wall, a set of shelves against another wall, and a third wall had man drawers for tools
Fix: the workshop had a whiteboard on one wall, a set of shelves against another wall, and many drawers for tools along a third wall
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Using colons
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1. Indicate that a list is coming up, and that after the list the sentence will end
Ex: here is my list of pets: dog,cat,fish.
2. Used to indicate an explanation, a definition, or an example of what has just been said is coming;
Ex: my search for the perfect pet came down to man's best friend: a dog.
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Subject and object pronoun list
Front
Subject: I, you, he, she, it, we, they
Object: me, you, him, her, it, us, them
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That vs who
Front
- who is the pronoun for a person
- that is for everything else
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How to fix run on sentence examples
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error: the dog Mary wants to put in the dog show is a beagle, it is a medium-sized member of the hound family
fix: add which after the comma
Error: the deli had no milk left after a rush of morning customers, the owner rushed to order more
Fix: add because at the beginning
Error: air plants like the Tillandsia species are tolerant of a wide range of climates, they thrive in room temperatures
Fix: replace the comma with a semicolon
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Verb tense
Front
- keep verbs in the same time period
Error: even though office hours had been over for some time, the professor and her students are continuing their productive work on the research project
Fix: even though office hours have been over for some time, the professor and her students are continuing their productive work on the research project
- if a sentence shifts in chronological time, verb tenses should shift to account for the change
Error: if the pace of technological advancements continues, in the future we ride self-driving cars
Fix: if the pace of technological advances continues, in the future we will ride self-driving cars
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Pronoun and Antecedent Agreement
Front
- same person throughout the sentence
- plural nouns are matched with plural nouns
Error: if a person wants to succeed in corporate life, you have to know the rules of the game
Fix: if a person wants to succeed in corporate life, she has to know the rules of the game
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Formatting lists
Front
- separated with a comma before the and or or that precedes the last list item
- if one of list items has a comma within it, then all the items should be deprecated with semicolons
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sentence fragment
Front
a sentence missing a subject or verb or complete thought basically it's not an independent clause
To fix either connect the fragment to an independent clause or add the missing subject or verb
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Who vs whom
Front
- who is used when the pronoun is the subject doing the action
- whom is used the pronoun is the object of the action
- one trick is to replace The Who or whom with I or me to see wether you need the subject or object form
Error: the essay points out that reduction in taxes only benefits those people whom understand the tax code
Fix: the essay points out that the reduction in taxes only benefits those people who understand the tax code
Using the trick- me understand the tax code doesn't work
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nonrestrictive modifier
Front
- if you can easily take out the modifier without losing the sentences meaning
- should be surrounded by commas
- comma after if the modifier is at the beginning
- comma before a modifier that ends a sentence
- surround it with commas if it's in the middle
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misplaced modifiers
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- a descriptive phrase that's not close enough to the thing it's supposed to be describing, making it sound likes it's referring to the wrong thing. To fix it nice the modifier closer to the noun it describes.
Error: the jacket was too small on the sales rack
Fix: the jacket on the sales rack was too small
The error is a misplaced modifier because it makes it seem like the sales rack is too small when In reality the jacket is too small.
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Run-on sentences
Front
Multiple independent clauses joined by a comma
- if one independent clause is the definition or explanation of the other, add a word such as because of which to the beginning of the explanation
- if neither independent clause defines or explains the other, combine them with either a comma + conjunction (such as or but) or a semi colon.
- split them up into two separate sentences
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Such as
Front
Introduces a series of examples to back up a point that's just been made. Put a comma before such as, and then no comma before the first list or example
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Independent clause
Front
Can function as a complete sentence because it has a subject verb-pair and does not start with a word or phrase that makes the clause dependent, such as when or because
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Contradiction or Digression adverbs
Front
Conjunctions used to describe a negative or opposing relationship between events. Explain that something happened despite something else. They indicate that the argument is shifting to another point
However: introduces a statement/idea that contradicts what has just been said
One the one/other hand: presents two ideas that opposed each other
But: despite what has just been said, here is information to the contrary
Nevertheless: in spite of what has just been said
Aside from: the example that follows is an exception to what is being discussed
While/Whereas: in contrast of comparison with the fact that
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subject verb agreement
Front
- The noun and verb have the same number
- collective nouns are singular example: the crowd of people laughs
Error: the is a beaker and three pipettes on the top shelf of the cupboard
fix: there are a beaker and three pipettes on the top shelf of the cupboard
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Look at answers that
Front
Say the same thing for example words such as however/nevertheless are reversals so if they appear together, eliminate them both.
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Combining simple sentences
- is there a chronological sequence that the two sentences are describing?
Front
- Make one sentence into a dependent clause of the other one by using a preposition such as before, after, or following
Error: young musicians are encouraged to perfect their techniques and skills through their conservatory training. After this, they can start their careers in small, local orchestras.
Fix: after perfecting their techniques and skills through their conservator training, young musicians can start their new careers in small, local orchestras.
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If there is a pronoun, it should be obvious what noun the pronoun is referring back too.
- if it's unclear which noun a pronoun is referring to or if a pronoun has no antecedent, the sentence needs to be rewritten in two ways; either the pronoun can be replaced with a noun or the phrase can be simplified
Error: the files arranged by the temporary workers were out of order, so management sent them back to the office
Fix: the files arranged by the temporary workers were out of order, so management sent the files back to the office
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Restrictive modifier
Front
- the sentence needs the modifier in order to make sense
- doesn't get surrounded by commas
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Similarity and Emphasis adverbs
Front
- Conjunctive adverbs connects things that are equal or similar
Moreover: as an additional - potentially more convincing or important - matter
Just as: in comparison to; similar to
Likewise: in the same way; also
Not only, but also: presents two ideas that support and emphasize each other
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Combining simple sentences
- does one define the other
Front
- combine them by inserting whatever is being defined into the defining sentence
Error: the conclusion scientists came to is the idea that instead of being up of particles, matter is actually made out of one-dimensional objects called strings. This is strong theory.
Fix: the conclusion scientists came to is strong theory, the idea that instead of being made up of particles, matter is actually made out of one dimensional objects called strings
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indefinite pronoun
Front
points out person, places, or things, but less clearly;
- many appear to be referring to multiple things or people but they're actually singular which means they use singular forms of verbs
Error: anyone thinking about becoming writers must be excellent readers
Fix: anyone thinking about becoming a write must be an excellent reader
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Overly wordy phrases
Front
One word is better than many words
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Explanation Adverbs
Front
- words that explain how two clauses in a sentence, or how two or more successive sentences, relate to one another
Because: what has just been said is true as a consequence of what is about to be said
Therefore and hence: it follows from what has just been said
For example and for instance: here is evidence that backs up the previous argument
Whereby: by which; using the idea/principle/concept just mentions; by means of
Consequently: directly following the thing that has just been described
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Combining simple sentences
- is there a person, place, thing, or concept that both sentences are talking about?
Front
- make one sentence into a dependent clause of the other through the repeated noun
Error: the voting rating has not decreased among uneducated citizens. Uneducated voters continue to vote for better schools
Fix: the voting rating has not decreased among uneducated voters, who continue to vote for better schools.
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Notes from practice test 8
Front
- which can go after a comma if it adds information
- that never goes after a comma
- who replaces the subject. He threw the ball to bob. Who threw the ball? He threw the ball
- whom replaces the object. To whom was the ball thrown to? The ball was thrown to him
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Correlative conjunctions
Front
Word pairs that must always be used together in the same order
Ex: "not only/but also", "either/or", " neither/nor"
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Dependent clause
Front
- must be attached to an independent clause to be a part of a complete sentence
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Redundancy
Front
- if a sentence expressed the bit of information twice, it's considered redundant
- error: Management was surprised to see a biannual upstick in sales twice a year
- fix: management was suprised to see a biannual upstick in sales
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dangling modifier
Front
- a descriptive phrase that begins as a sentence, has a comma after it, and has the noun it describes not placed right after the comma
- error: coating the sidewalk, we trudged through the heavy snow
- fix: we trudged through the heavy snow coating the sidewalk
Error was a dangling modifier because it made it seem like "we" were coating the snow
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Using dashes
Front
- are like parentheses. They separate out a piece that is explanatory but not crucial.
-sometimes this piece is a digressive thought; sometimes is a list of examples
- if it's in the middle of a sentence it needs dashes on both sides
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Using semicolons ADD EXAMPLE
Front
1. In lists they separate items that have commas
2. Fix run-on sentences by separating two independent clauses with a conjunction
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illogical comparison
Front
- you can only compare things that are alike in some way
Error: I like Stanley's apples better than Cora
Fix: I like Stanley's apples better than Cora's
- you can't compare something to all things of that type. Instead, you can only compare that thing to all other things of that type
Error: for astronauts, the moon is easier to get to than any other space object
Fix: for astronauts, the moon is easier to get to than any other space object
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Subject vs Object Pronouns
Front
- subjects do verbs and objects have verbs done to them. In the sentence "A dog chases its tail," dog is the subject noun, chases is the verb that it's doing, and tail is the object noun.
- pronounce change form depending on wether they're subjects of objects.
- she likes him, woman is the subject so the pronoun is she
- he likes her, the woman is the object so the pronoun is her
- to figure out wether to use a subject or object pronouns, take out the other noun and try the sentence with just the pronoun
Error: me and my parents dinner
Fix: my parents and I ate dinner
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List of indefinite pronouns
Front
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Punctuation modifiers
Front
Phrases that modify or describe a part of a sentence are punctuated differently depending on wether they are essential or nonessential part of the sentence
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Plurals and Possessives
Front
- to make a purse noun that doesn't own anything, add s to the end of the singular noun
- to make a possessive singular noun, add an apostrophe + s to the end of a singular noun
- to make a possessive plural noun, add an apostrophe to the end of the plural noun
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Dependent clauses as subject sentences
Front
- sometimes, instead of having a simple noun for a subject, a sentence can use a dependent clause.
- treat the clause as a singular noun such as Albert Einstein
Error: whoever came up with the idea to put solar panels on rooftops are geniuses
Fix. Whoever came up with the idea to put solar panels on rooftops is a genius